Next Step: Write a conclusion and identify five spelling mistakes
In conclusion I believe the scene was created well to an extent. The only thing I would have changed would have been the editing. The background even though was blurred out it didn’t look professional. If it was a must that the background had to be blurred out which I believe was a wise choice because of affect it has but if it was blurred out and made it look professional it would have given more of a Hollywood look.
1. Dialog= Dialogue*
2. Emphasise= Empathise*
3. Affect= Effect*
4. Languge= Language*
5. Physical= Physically*
My EBI: Basic errors and lack of a conclusion need addressing
Self Evaluation:
Attainment: Always turning up to class and doing my homework to the best standards to gain credits
Effort: 2 because sometimes, I don’t really try my best and push myself
Submission and quality of homework: 2 I hand my homework in and only but have I failed to do so in some cases
Ability to work independently: 1 I don’t normally ask for help from anyone and wait for the teacher’s response.
Quality of writing: 2 although my hand writing is quite neat my spelling is very bad.
Organisation of blog: 1 I always title my work and which teacher its for. Plus all my homework is order
Oral contributions in class: 1 if I have something to say I put my hand up and I contribute.
EBI:
1. Always hand my work in.
2. Work on spelling
3. Every lesson and every piece of homework done to my best ability and handed in on time
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